Jocelyn Hopkins
"Lost in the Abyss of the Past"
By Jocelyn Hopkins
I was seven the last time we had a family outing. My parents never really had the time to do family adventures like we used to once they got their big fancy jobs. It’s either “I’m too busy,” or “I can’t today, I have a meeting.” My grandma scolded them the other night about them ignoring me, so from what they told me they used their “vacation days” to go to this Lantern Walk, whatever that means. Grandma paid for it, they didn’t want to spend their money on such a “futile trip.” Either way, I’m glad we get to have a family trip like we used to.
The car begins to slow down as they arrive at their destination. The brisk air hits the boy’s face as he hops excitedly out of the car. “Loch Ard Sculpture Trail,” the arched sign reads, at the entrance of the gathering area. Quickly, he joyfully grabs his bags and runs toward the gathering area where he sees a tall, skinny, man holding a sign saying “Tour Guide,” and a large group of people. Families, couples, and friends all together admiring the lush nature and the still, obsidian lake.
The boy visually explores the area, looking onto the empty and unsettlingly calm lake. The reflection of the first stars lighting the dusk, clear sky as the sun begins to set. He looks up to get a clearer view of the stars, the chilled breeze slightly brushing his cheek and the smell of dirt and pinewood filling his senses. Looking at his parents, these natural scents and views reminding him just how much he admires nature and is excited to go on this hike.
In the distance behind his parents, he spots a small luminous blue light in the middle of the lake. Like a fire on the candle, it dances on the smooth water, seemingly waving for him to come closer. Enchanted by this flickering dance, he makes a few steps toward it but is stopped by the tour guide giving him his lantern. After the intruding distraction, he stares back at the spot, with no flame in sight.
The lights of the lanterns begin to illuminate the area as the dusk transitions to night and they start their walk into the forest along the bank of the lake with the boy and his family following in the back. A small cautionary sign at the entrance of the trail lights up as each lantern passes by, “113 Total Deaths. Be Cautious, Be Vigilant, And Stay On The Path!”
“Agh, we’re finally at the first turn! I feel like we’ve been walking foreeeeever.” The boy was exhausted. Despite loving this hike along the edge of the lake, he’s ready to see the forest portion of the trek. As they enter the forest, he sees a variety of rocks, “two little gray rocks, ooooh those big ones have green fuzzy moss! And that rock has….a blue fire?” A blue, little fire, dancing on a round mossy rock, just like the one he saw earlier on the lake.
Curious and excited about the new discovery, he slowly walks over, but as he gets close, it flies quickly past him and stops on the path he just came from. As he’s studying the interesting creature, more begin to pop into existence leading a trail back to the lake. In the distance, he can see many of the little blue wisps playing in the water. Eagerly, he drops his bag, throws off his coat, places his lantern down on the floor and follows the paths the flickering flames had created for him, and jumps right into the lake to play with these wonderful and beautiful forms. But as he surfaces, there’s none to be found.
Everyone in the group whips around, wondering what the commotion is about. The boy in his state of confusion searches for the wisps, but is yanked out of the lake by his parent. Confused but thrilled, the boy tries to explain to his parents about the dancing blue flames, however, they disregard his stories, criticize him, and harshly drag him back to the group, ordering him to pick up his stuff.
Disheartened, drenched, and cold, the boy tries to use a blanket he packed to dry himself off. Continuing down the trail, he drags behind the group wondering where the wisps could have gone. “They were there and then they were not! I swear I saw them, right?”
Deeper and deeper into the forest they went, he starts to admire it, and all its lovely sounds. The crinkle of gravel and dirt as each person steps. The smooth and peaceful wind blowing through the trees. As he’s cherishing these moments, he spots a blue flame once again on the left side of the path. He walks past it, interested but doesn’t want to get in trouble again, and yet he sees another on the right side of the path. This flame, however, is different from the last, it’s bigger and brighter, waving toward the boy as if it’s signaling, “Come on, get closer.” Intrigued by this new spectacle, the boy hesitantly walks over to the flame. This one, though, doesn’t disappear, it remains bright and beautiful.
“What a beautiful light! Maybe my parents would like to see it?” The boy turns to see his parents walking off with the group. “Should I yell for them? They may just get mad. But now I know I saw the wisps earlier, they’d love to see it too!” As the boy was about to yell out, the wisp jumps in front of the boy's view, startling him. Disoriented and regaining his focus, he no longer sees his parents down the path, instead, he sees them deep in the forest and a path of blue flames flickering toward them.
Hurriedly, he gets up from the floor and races to catch up with his parents. To his surprise, they greet him warmingly, signaling for them all to play tag, the boy being it. As he chases them through the forest, he suddenly trips on a root of a tree he didn’t seem to notice, hurts his leg, and “wakes up.” “Ow…..ugh that hurt…wait, Where did Mum and Dad go?” He stumbles to his feet, nervously searching for his parents. “Maybe this way, no…that way, maybe back that way? Where am I?” Realizing he’s lost, he frantically searches for his parents, the path, or even the dim glow of a lantern. After what seems like an eternity of searching, injured and alone, he gives up and curls into a ball with his lantern in hand as he weeps into the ground.
After he’s calmed down a bit, he turns his head and opens his eyes to see a wisp inspecting him. The same large wisp on the gray mossy rock. He quickly sits up to see many blue flames surrounding him, watching him. Confused and scared he shuffles away keeping his eyes on the wisps, but a tree stops him in his backward path. Staring at them, he notices they begin to make another path, the large one changes into the form of his parents, and gestures to follow the path. Impelled by the possibility of them leading him to his parents, he is consumed by relief and stubbles up, following, as they illuminate his path, leaving behind his belongings and the lantern.
As quick as his injured leg can take him, he rushes to find his parents, excited to see them again. As he hobbles, his surroundings begin to change. He finds himself at the back of his home. A large lake covered this area; he and his family, his friends, and their neighborhood would all enjoy their days swimming and playing to their heart's content in the past. Confused but delighted to see this image, his parents in the lake wave for him to join them. As though in a trance, he makes his way to the water. It’s cool and still at the lake's edge. He hops in.
Joining his friends and family in the fun, they laugh and play as though they’ve been here the entire time. Forgetting his previous escapade, he enjoys this time with his parents, a time he’s been treasuring and grasping to have once again. Everyone suddenly dives down into the water, the boy following close behind. As he makes his way down, he goes deeper and deeper, but slowly the figures grow farther and farther from view. A flash of the wisps swimming down taking the place of his parents and friends, covers his vision. Air. You Need AIR! He wakes up gasping for a breath but only water fills his lungs. He struggles desperately to swim to the top of the lake. He’s too deep. His leg hurt. He fades out of consciousness, taking in water and sinking into the darkness of the lake.
The black abyss of water is as still as it started. No sound can be heard, no life can be found. A wisp appears atop the lake. A little flame, one of a little boy it makes out to be. The flame doesn’t keep the figure long and changes to be identical to the wisps seen throughout the forest. It disappears, like a flame on a candle being blown out, as we see a group of lanterns wildly hurrying toward the lake, searching for the little boy.
"Lost in the Abyss of the Past"
By Jocelyn Hopkins
I was seven the last time we had a family outing. My parents never really had the time to do family adventures like we used to once they got their big fancy jobs. It’s either “I’m too busy,” or “I can’t today, I have a meeting.” My grandma scolded them the other night about them ignoring me, so from what they told me they used their “vacation days” to go to this Lantern Walk, whatever that means. Grandma paid for it, they didn’t want to spend their money on such a “futile trip.” Either way, I’m glad we get to have a family trip like we used to.
The car begins to slow down as they arrive at their destination. The brisk air hits the boy’s face as he hops excitedly out of the car. “Loch Ard Sculpture Trail,” the arched sign reads, at the entrance of the gathering area. Quickly, he joyfully grabs his bags and runs toward the gathering area where he sees a tall, skinny, man holding a sign saying “Tour Guide,” and a large group of people. Families, couples, and friends all together admiring the lush nature and the still, obsidian lake.
The boy visually explores the area, looking onto the empty and unsettlingly calm lake. The reflection of the first stars lighting the dusk, clear sky as the sun begins to set. He looks up to get a clearer view of the stars, the chilled breeze slightly brushing his cheek and the smell of dirt and pinewood filling his senses. Looking at his parents, these natural scents and views reminding him just how much he admires nature and is excited to go on this hike.
In the distance behind his parents, he spots a small luminous blue light in the middle of the lake. Like a fire on the candle, it dances on the smooth water, seemingly waving for him to come closer. Enchanted by this flickering dance, he makes a few steps toward it but is stopped by the tour guide giving him his lantern. After the intruding distraction, he stares back at the spot, with no flame in sight.
The lights of the lanterns begin to illuminate the area as the dusk transitions to night and they start their walk into the forest along the bank of the lake with the boy and his family following in the back. A small cautionary sign at the entrance of the trail lights up as each lantern passes by, “113 Total Deaths. Be Cautious, Be Vigilant, And Stay On The Path!”
“Agh, we’re finally at the first turn! I feel like we’ve been walking foreeeeever.” The boy was exhausted. Despite loving this hike along the edge of the lake, he’s ready to see the forest portion of the trek. As they enter the forest, he sees a variety of rocks, “two little gray rocks, ooooh those big ones have green fuzzy moss! And that rock has….a blue fire?” A blue, little fire, dancing on a round mossy rock, just like the one he saw earlier on the lake.
Curious and excited about the new discovery, he slowly walks over, but as he gets close, it flies quickly past him and stops on the path he just came from. As he’s studying the interesting creature, more begin to pop into existence leading a trail back to the lake. In the distance, he can see many of the little blue wisps playing in the water. Eagerly, he drops his bag, throws off his coat, places his lantern down on the floor and follows the paths the flickering flames had created for him, and jumps right into the lake to play with these wonderful and beautiful forms. But as he surfaces, there’s none to be found.
Everyone in the group whips around, wondering what the commotion is about. The boy in his state of confusion searches for the wisps, but is yanked out of the lake by his parent. Confused but thrilled, the boy tries to explain to his parents about the dancing blue flames, however, they disregard his stories, criticize him, and harshly drag him back to the group, ordering him to pick up his stuff.
Disheartened, drenched, and cold, the boy tries to use a blanket he packed to dry himself off. Continuing down the trail, he drags behind the group wondering where the wisps could have gone. “They were there and then they were not! I swear I saw them, right?”
Deeper and deeper into the forest they went, he starts to admire it, and all its lovely sounds. The crinkle of gravel and dirt as each person steps. The smooth and peaceful wind blowing through the trees. As he’s cherishing these moments, he spots a blue flame once again on the left side of the path. He walks past it, interested but doesn’t want to get in trouble again, and yet he sees another on the right side of the path. This flame, however, is different from the last, it’s bigger and brighter, waving toward the boy as if it’s signaling, “Come on, get closer.” Intrigued by this new spectacle, the boy hesitantly walks over to the flame. This one, though, doesn’t disappear, it remains bright and beautiful.
“What a beautiful light! Maybe my parents would like to see it?” The boy turns to see his parents walking off with the group. “Should I yell for them? They may just get mad. But now I know I saw the wisps earlier, they’d love to see it too!” As the boy was about to yell out, the wisp jumps in front of the boy's view, startling him. Disoriented and regaining his focus, he no longer sees his parents down the path, instead, he sees them deep in the forest and a path of blue flames flickering toward them.
Hurriedly, he gets up from the floor and races to catch up with his parents. To his surprise, they greet him warmingly, signaling for them all to play tag, the boy being it. As he chases them through the forest, he suddenly trips on a root of a tree he didn’t seem to notice, hurts his leg, and “wakes up.” “Ow…..ugh that hurt…wait, Where did Mum and Dad go?” He stumbles to his feet, nervously searching for his parents. “Maybe this way, no…that way, maybe back that way? Where am I?” Realizing he’s lost, he frantically searches for his parents, the path, or even the dim glow of a lantern. After what seems like an eternity of searching, injured and alone, he gives up and curls into a ball with his lantern in hand as he weeps into the ground.
After he’s calmed down a bit, he turns his head and opens his eyes to see a wisp inspecting him. The same large wisp on the gray mossy rock. He quickly sits up to see many blue flames surrounding him, watching him. Confused and scared he shuffles away keeping his eyes on the wisps, but a tree stops him in his backward path. Staring at them, he notices they begin to make another path, the large one changes into the form of his parents, and gestures to follow the path. Impelled by the possibility of them leading him to his parents, he is consumed by relief and stubbles up, following, as they illuminate his path, leaving behind his belongings and the lantern.
As quick as his injured leg can take him, he rushes to find his parents, excited to see them again. As he hobbles, his surroundings begin to change. He finds himself at the back of his home. A large lake covered this area; he and his family, his friends, and their neighborhood would all enjoy their days swimming and playing to their heart's content in the past. Confused but delighted to see this image, his parents in the lake wave for him to join them. As though in a trance, he makes his way to the water. It’s cool and still at the lake's edge. He hops in.
Joining his friends and family in the fun, they laugh and play as though they’ve been here the entire time. Forgetting his previous escapade, he enjoys this time with his parents, a time he’s been treasuring and grasping to have once again. Everyone suddenly dives down into the water, the boy following close behind. As he makes his way down, he goes deeper and deeper, but slowly the figures grow farther and farther from view. A flash of the wisps swimming down taking the place of his parents and friends, covers his vision. Air. You Need AIR! He wakes up gasping for a breath but only water fills his lungs. He struggles desperately to swim to the top of the lake. He’s too deep. His leg hurt. He fades out of consciousness, taking in water and sinking into the darkness of the lake.
The black abyss of water is as still as it started. No sound can be heard, no life can be found. A wisp appears atop the lake. A little flame, one of a little boy it makes out to be. The flame doesn’t keep the figure long and changes to be identical to the wisps seen throughout the forest. It disappears, like a flame on a candle being blown out, as we see a group of lanterns wildly hurrying toward the lake, searching for the little boy.
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