Mini Critique ROOM PROJECT

[Professor Herrera]

Please submit 2 renders of your interior room. 1 as a day time scene and the second as a night time scene. These renders should be as complete as possible and only needing minor edits/additions.

[Jammii]

Jamie Brock

[MOcampo]

Not a part of the critique but I love the knuckles!! It's beautiful. Only thing I'd change is the color of the books on the shelves in the back as they blend into the wall a little bit.

[jjga25]

Jaimilie Gracia

[Magaly.T]

Magaly Trevino

[ErosShatterer98]

It looks great! The pillows look a bit shiny though..

[ScepTech]

Gabriel Flores

[Comedic_D00dle]

Needs more stuff on shelves, Love the variety of books

[MOcampo]

Great work! The material on the sofa and the pillows can be adjusted a little bit as they seem a little to shiny like plastic. Keep it up!

[ErosShatterer98]

Senovia Lozano-Hernandez

[Jammii]

I really like the glass table you modeled. For the room I think the window's size/placement makes everything look small in comparison and maybe bring it down a little more would make it more fitting for the room. (･ω･)b

[MOcampo]

Madelyn Ocampo

[Rudy Encinas]

Rudy Encinas

[Jammii]

Thicken that blanket up into a comforter like the reference and maybe make the wooden underside of the bed a little sharper. Overall looking pretty good can't wait to see materials added (･ω･)b

[Comedic_D00dle]

Pablo Mata

[Jammii]

Like the wrinkles you have on the couch and the back cushion's shape however I think the bottom cushion of the couch is missing a few edges to achieve that boxed look like the reference.

[GlitchBot69]

Sergio Manriquez

[MOcampo]

Love the model! I think you could use another light source on top of the dome light to add some more light into the scene. You lose a bit of detail in the shadows. Great work!

[ShylynnWeeks]

Shylynn Weeks

[Rudy Encinas]

it looks nice, the essential details of furniture and decorations are there, with the exception of the curtains. in the reference image the chair seems a bit narrower, and additionally the top of the back cushion could be scaled down near the top of the armrests.