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  • Spring 2023 | Sword Block Out

    Spring 2023 | Sword Block Out

    Submit images from each view top, front, side, and perspective to this post.
    • Make sure to have the right dimensions for the sword
    • Make the basic shapes for each part of the sword.
    • Make sure to name each part of the sword.
    • Give feedback on two of your classmates' post

    Due Wednesday, March 22nd
    Before the beginning of class​​​​​

  • #2
    B. Rocha

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    Ashton: Overall looks good from all angles. It reads well and I like the design. There is a tiny amount of pinching happening on the end of the fleur de lis pommel but I think adding either a MultiCut or one more subdivision should smooth it out fine.

    Chris: Nice organization of Outliner, good symmetry and block out from all angles. On the profile view of the sword, it might read better to push the upper tip end of the blade inward w/ Scale more to emulate that pointy/sharp end. Right now seeing its profile makes the blade look like its all one thickness.
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    • #3
      Ashton Koranek
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      B. Rocha: on your pummel and im not sure if you have images for the pummel it looks like the pummel has sharper edges instead of very soft edges you have on your. Other then that it reads well and i love the slit down the middle
      Chris: I think it looks great but maybe a little too blocky especially on the handle area but sub divisions should be able to fix it if you haven't already done that.
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      • #4
        Chris Sooksawat
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        @B. Rocha - Shape is looking pretty good. Would add more bevel to the base of the pommel instead of it being flat.
        @Ashton - I don't know if you have it in the blockout but longswords typically have a "fuller" in the center. Looks nice overall though.
        Last edited by csooksawat; March 22, 2023, 17:01.

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        • #5
          Vinnie Melendez


          Ashton: I think yours is looking really good so early in the process especially the little embellishments on the grip and pummel.
          Chris: Your sword reads really well and I can't wait to see what it looks like finished.




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          • #6
            Adrian Garza

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            Vinne: got a great base going I think, the proportions look pretty solid, though the guard looks a little too big/thick but I'm not sure if that's what the reference looks like.


            Ashton: The decorations on the guard look amazing. Though it just seems that from the top you can tell that the sword is not symmetrical but that should be an easy fix (unless that is just because of the camera angle).

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            • #7
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              Vinnie: i feel like you got something here, the circle on the bottom of the handle is a nice touch to your sword
              ashton: yours is ooking pretty great, you added alot of detail and molding to it so overall you really got something here

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              • #8
                Lourdes Castro

                B - Yours is looking really good all of the shape and parts are there I'm excited to see how the texturing comes out in the end.

                Ashton- I really like how your pommel turned out so far and your blade definitely looks sharp that was something I was having some trouble with without making it look wonky so really good job on that.

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                • #9
                  Chaya Fuller
                  Chris : Your sword is looking really good so far, good work.
                  Vinnie: Your sword looking good so far, but I do feel like its hard to tell the pieces apart from your top angle.
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                  • #10
                    Meg Villanueva
                    Adrian: The overall shape for the sword is pretty awesome and seems to match well with the reference, though the cross guard seems to be a missing a bit of the geometry going into the sword, though that's an easy fix ( the little point part at the top of the cross guard).
                    Ashton: The shapes and sword looks incredible, but the cross guard seems to be really sharp from the top angle and softer in the other ones. This may be intentional, but make sure to just double check the sword reference and decide whether it's more smoothed or sharper.
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                    • #11
                      Aaliyah Mickle

                      Chaya: The blade looks slightly off center from the hilt. but other than that it looks like its coming along well.
                      Lola: The quillon seems to have some slight rotation to it when compared to the rest of the hilt. Nice job on the helix handle though.

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                      • #12
                        Josh Rodriguez

                        Ashton: its looking great, i really like the way the handle is coming together.
                        B. Rocha : It looks really cool, i like the detail on the handle and on the blade

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                        • #13
                          Jocelyn Hopkins

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                          • #14
                            Evely Torres

                            Ashton: Yours is looking really clean so far. Just don't get too caught up on the little details before you finish the main geometry.

                            Adrian: You're getting there, just make sure you keep an eye on the edges and start smoothing some.
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                            • #15
                              Nicholas Wolf:
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                              JoshR: Cool looking katana, more details needed for viewing experence though proportions look decent.
                              Aaliyah Mickle: Cool looking sword, however sword looks very flat when viewed from the side, but general proportions look good.

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