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Exercise #19 Walk Cleanup
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Noah Zuniga
- Frame 9: Left hand's clipping through the leg
- Throughout: There's no hip tilt
- Frame 17: Right leg's clipping through the leg
- Frame 12: Left foot lands flat footed
- Frame 1-14: Doesn't look like there's up/down
- Throughout: Could emphasize the chest bobbing more
- Throughout: No drag on the hands
- Frame 1 & 24: Left arm doesn't follow the same motion as the right
- Throughout: No head bob
- Frame 14-24: No shoulder/clavicle tilt
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Frame 9- Left arm clipping through body
Body off balance from side view
Weight should be over right foot
Frame 17- Left leg clips through right leg
Hips should rotate counter clockwise
Chest should rotate clockwise
Contrapposto should be reversed
Frames 1 and 24- Left leg starts moving before right leg plants
Right arm is a straight line
Frame 12- Left foot lands flat footed
Frame 6- Weight should be over right foot
Hips should rotate counter clockwise
Chest should rotate clockwise
Contrapposto to hip and shoulders should be reversed
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frames 6 and 9 the arm path needs to be adjusted
clip through 9
Frame 1- arm too straight
more hip rotation-9,17,20
Move foot to avoid collision-17
More frames to break up elbow-3,6,9
Add Clavical rotation- 3,6,9,14,20
Breakdown Left Wrist- 12 , 14
Back Bend on Down-3,12
toes shouldn't be straight foward- 3,17
Translate root up-9,20
Translate root down- 3,14
Head Rotation Down-3,14
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Nehemiah Rodriguez
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Frame 6: weight shift is leaning towards wrong leg
Frame 9: arm sinks through hip
Frame 17: leg sinks through other leg
Frame 17/20: one of the arms is still placed forward in front of wrong leg
Frame 24: arm is too straight, needs break
all frames: hips are facing towards one direction rather than rotating, no head movement
Oziel Garza
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Benjamin Lukasik
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Animation Notation:
1. Left Arm Clipping Through Body.
2. No Hip Tilt or turning at all.
3. Right Leg clips through the Left Leg.
4. The Legs have different side movements on the Up pose.
5. There isn't any upwards translation on the first Up pose
6. Shoulder rotation is present on the first passthrough pose, but not on the second.
7. Proper contraposto is also absent from the second passthrough pose.
8. The left arm has no break in the elbow on its poses, only in the wrist.
9. Weight distribution is opposite to what it should be on the first passthrough pose.
10. Weight distribution is also entirely absent on the second passthrough pose.
11. The Left foot doesnt travel nearly as far as the right foot does when moving into its contact and down poses.
12. There is subtle head movement on the first up pose, but absolutely none anywhere else.
13. The Left foot had no rotation on its contact pose.
14. Both feet werent bent enough on their passing poses.
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Johnathan Rios
Frame 1/24 - push the arch in the arm - Right
Frame 6 - arm pushed out to far - Right
Frame 17 - foot clips through the leg and gave it an outward translation- Right
Frame 12- foot does not have a peel before landing - Left
Frame 9 - arm clips through the body - Left
Frame 1/24 - the needs a bend pose and drag on the hand - Left
Frame 17 - leg has a ball roll, needs to be flat- Left
Frame 12 - wrong hip rotation
Frame 20 - Hip rotation towards the left leg
Frame 9 - Hip rotation towards the right leg
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The hips barely move
The up and down motion is very snappy
On frame one the left arm is in front of the body which causes the hand to be cliping on frame 9
On frame 16 the right foot slides to the left
Which causes the foot to clip on frame 17
19 through 23 add wrist movement on left to match the right also add a bend in the elbow to reflect the right arm
On frame 12 knee snapping
Moving root up and down
Add more to the spine
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1
-Left arm is straight and should be rotated towards center of chest
-Right arm should be rotated towards the back
-Hip Rotation
-Wrist rotation
3
-Left arm is straight
-Hip Rotation
6
-Root should be translated up
-Right Leg should be straight
-Left leg should have more bend and foot rotated back
-Right Arm is too far out
-Contrapasto
-Hip rotation
9
-Left arm clipps through leg
-Left arm is straight
-Root should be translated up
-Hip Rotation
12
-Left hand clipping through body
-Hip Rotation
-Left foot needs heel roll
14
-feet should be spread out more
-arms need to be further back/forward
-Hip Rotation
17
-Root should be translated up
-Right Foot Clips through left leg
-Weight Shift
-Right arm is rotated too much
-Contrapasto
Hip Rotation
20
-Right arm should be rotated back
-Weight Shift
Joshua Starrett
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left arm clipping through torso at frame 9
(pull arm out)
left arm too stiff
(breakdown left elbow)
right foot clips through leg at frame 16
(pull leg out more at frame 17, 20)
exaggerate Y translation down at contact pose at frames 3, 12
(translate main body cntrl down on Y axis)
weight shift for right leg not apparent on frame 17
(rotate hips to favor the right leg)
exaggerate Y translation up on passing pose at frames 6, 17
(translate main body cntrl up on Y axis)
have left and right foot controls inward on passing poses at frames 6, 17
(rotate foot controls inwards)
spine too stiff on contact poses 3, 12
(bend spine controls more forward)
left wrist is stiff
(breakdown left wrist)
right arm can be pushed more behind torso in front view
Nicole MadrigalLast edited by Nicole Madrigal; November 5, 2019, 11:05.
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