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  • Exercise #18 Walk Cleanup

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    Post a gif of the cleaned up walk cycle and post the list of fixes!
    Last edited by Professor Arevalo; November 4, 2019, 14:39.

  • #2
    1. Weight Shift
    2. Arm clipping
    3. Foot clipping
    4. No drag on arm
    5. Incorrect down pose
    6. Incorrect up pose
    7. Incorrect spine rotation
    8. Incorrect hip rotation
    9. No head drag
    10. Incorrect arm poses

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    - Josh Q

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    • #3
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      Frame 3 Move root control down for down pose

      Frame 6 Move root control left towards right leg

      Frame 9 left arm is clipping gthourght body

      Frame 17 right foot clipping throught left foot

      Frame 17 left foot should be planted on ground

      Frame 12 Rotate root control favoring leading leg

      No head bobbing

      Left arm too stiff add breakup in frame 6

      Graph Editor clean up

      Sonny Ponce

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      • #4
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        frame 9 was clipping through arm,
        added more sway in wrists
        adjusted arm spacing from body throughout cycle
        Isaac Tevino

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        • #5
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          Frame 1 - LEFT ARM: Moved arm back + bent elbow to make a more natural contact pose.
          RIGHT ARM: Pulled arm in more.
          RIGHT FOOT: Moved foot forward and increased heel roll to straighten out leg more
          HIPS: Added more twist to hips.
          Frame 6 - R CLAVICLE: Rotated back a little bit
          Emphasized weight shift.
          Frame 9 - LEFT ARM: Rotated out to prevent hand clipping
          Frame 12 - HIPS: Moved hips to correct twist position (reversed)
          RIGHT ARM: Pulled right arm in more
          LEFT ARM: Pulled left arm in more
          LEFT FOOT: Added heel roll, pulled leg out to straighten leg more.
          RIGHT FOOT: Pulled foot back to straighten leg out more.
          Frame 17 - RIGHT FOOT: Removed bad translation on X axis. Translated foot in opposite direction to fix.
          SPINE (all except "cn"): Added/increased spine rotation.
          L CLAVICLE: Rotated backwards a little
          Frame 12-17 - Removed rotate X keyframes on CN SpineCShape.
          Emphasized weight shift.
          Graph Editor - HIPS: Fixed translate Y graph. (Added an up on frame 9.)
          Cleaned up extra keyframes on curves.

          Kaitlyn Schepise

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          • #6
            frame 12- smaller step than the first
            frame 9- arm clipping through
            frame 11- goes toe first instead oh heel first
            frame 17- clipping through feet
            frame 6- too much exaggeration in wrist
            frame 1- unequal distance between legs
            frame 6- wrong passing pose, legs bent too much should be an up pose
            frame 1- arm too straight
            frame 13- need more hip tilt
            frame 7- arm swings out too wide
            frame 10- leaned far back
            frame 15- wrong passing pose, legs bent too much
            frame 7- legs bent too much for passing
            head throughout bounces back and forth too harshly
            frame 1- both feet not on floor
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            Adonia Portillo

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            • #7
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              Frame 1 : Left arm is stiff
              Frame 1 : Add ball roll to right foot
              Frame 3 : Spine is too stiff
              Frame 3 : Left arm is stiff
              Frame 6 : root control can be pushed up a bit
              Frame 6 : Left hand needs to be dragged
              Frame 9 : Left hand clipping through
              Frame 14 : Spine is to stiff
              Frame 17 : Right foot clipping through body
              Frame 17 : Left foot isnt planted on the floor due to root control too high
              Frame 24 : Left Arm is stiff

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              • #8
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                Frame 1-12: Left arm is straight out, lacking any sort of weight



                Frame 5: Weight shift is going the wrong way.



                Frame 3-6: Shoulder weight is incorrect. Left foot sliding Right wrist is bent over



                -None or no distinct Down or Passing Poses



                Frame 9: Left Arm is clipping through the body. Weight shift is constant rather than lifting up.



                Frame 7: No foot resistance



                Frame 20: Hardly any shift in arms' movement.



                Frame 14-19: Right arm is stiff



                Full Animation: There is no transfer of the figure's body during her walking so it is all unorganized. The movement in her spine is barely visible. Key points of each pose are not specified.


                -Gabrielle Parmer

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                • #9
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                  Frame 1:
                  -Fixed Right arm poses from shoulder to wrist
                  -Legs twist right
                  -Upper Torso face left
                  -Contropasto

                  Frame 3:
                  -Drag on Right arm
                  -Spine rotation
                  -Waist down for weight
                  -Centered waist for balance

                  Frame 6:
                  -Shifted waist higher
                  -Shifted waist to the left
                  -Moved Left leg to the center for balanced weight
                  -Passing Pose
                  -rotated head to face down

                  Frame 9:
                  -Raised waist higher
                  -weight shift to the left
                  -upper torso faces right
                  -Spine rotation

                  Frame 12:
                  -Spine rotation
                  -Waist lowered for weight
                  -Raised left arm to be more centered

                  Frame 14:
                  -drag for both arms
                  -Fixed weight shift
                  -Raised left arm moved to center
                  -Moved

                  Frame 17:
                  -Lifted waist
                  -Moved left leg away from center
                  -Lifted left leg higher
                  -Fixed both arm to proper position

                  Frame 20:
                  -Fixed left arm to be higher
                  -Raised waist higher
                  -fixed arm drag
                  -Left leg moved to be more centered

                  Frame 24:
                  -Copy and pasted everything from frame 1


                  Mariah Kimberly Hortillano

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                  • #10
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                    Josh Maldonado

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                    • #11
                      frame 9-left arm is clipping through body
                      Frame 1 and 3- the left arm seem to have switched positions
                      frame 3- left wrist should be rotated
                      frame 6- left arm is to close to body
                      frame 6-right leg should be straight
                      frame 6- add rotate to hips
                      frame 9- leg should be straight
                      fram 12-left heel should make contact with floor
                      frame 17- right leg is in front of left leg
                      frame 17-left leg should be straight, there should be no ball roll, right lef should be closer
                      frame 17- add rotate to hips
                      frame 14-right leg should be more back
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                      Samantha Munguia

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                      • #12
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                        One of the legs on 16 was crossing through the other
                        There was stiff arm somewhere in 8, at the beginning of the walk
                        There was not enough leg raise at 20
                        The center of gravity doesn't move at all
                        There needs to be foot rolling at 12 and 24
                        More hip raise at contact poses 5 and 16
                        Wrist need movement at 7

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