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Exercise #18 Walk Cleanup
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Frame 3 Move root control down for down pose
Frame 6 Move root control left towards right leg
Frame 9 left arm is clipping gthourght body
Frame 17 right foot clipping throught left foot
Frame 17 left foot should be planted on ground
Frame 12 Rotate root control favoring leading leg
No head bobbing
Left arm too stiff add breakup in frame 6
Graph Editor clean up
Sonny Ponce
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Frame 1 - LEFT ARM: Moved arm back + bent elbow to make a more natural contact pose.
RIGHT ARM: Pulled arm in more.
RIGHT FOOT: Moved foot forward and increased heel roll to straighten out leg more
HIPS: Added more twist to hips.
Frame 6 - R CLAVICLE: Rotated back a little bit
Emphasized weight shift.
Frame 9 - LEFT ARM: Rotated out to prevent hand clipping
Frame 12 - HIPS: Moved hips to correct twist position (reversed)
RIGHT ARM: Pulled right arm in more
LEFT ARM: Pulled left arm in more
LEFT FOOT: Added heel roll, pulled leg out to straighten leg more.
RIGHT FOOT: Pulled foot back to straighten leg out more.
Frame 17 - RIGHT FOOT: Removed bad translation on X axis. Translated foot in opposite direction to fix.
SPINE (all except "cn"): Added/increased spine rotation.
L CLAVICLE: Rotated backwards a little
Frame 12-17 - Removed rotate X keyframes on CN SpineCShape.
Emphasized weight shift.
Graph Editor - HIPS: Fixed translate Y graph. (Added an up on frame 9.)
Cleaned up extra keyframes on curves.
Kaitlyn Schepise
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frame 12- smaller step than the first
frame 9- arm clipping through
frame 11- goes toe first instead oh heel first
frame 17- clipping through feet
frame 6- too much exaggeration in wrist
frame 1- unequal distance between legs
frame 6- wrong passing pose, legs bent too much should be an up pose
frame 1- arm too straight
frame 13- need more hip tilt
frame 7- arm swings out too wide
frame 10- leaned far back
frame 15- wrong passing pose, legs bent too much
frame 7- legs bent too much for passing
head throughout bounces back and forth too harshly
frame 1- both feet not on floor
Adonia Portillo
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Frame 1 : Left arm is stiff
Frame 1 : Add ball roll to right foot
Frame 3 : Spine is too stiff
Frame 3 : Left arm is stiff
Frame 6 : root control can be pushed up a bit
Frame 6 : Left hand needs to be dragged
Frame 9 : Left hand clipping through
Frame 14 : Spine is to stiff
Frame 17 : Right foot clipping through body
Frame 17 : Left foot isnt planted on the floor due to root control too high
Frame 24 : Left Arm is stiff
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Frame 1-12: Left arm is straight out, lacking any sort of weight
Frame 5: Weight shift is going the wrong way.
Frame 3-6: Shoulder weight is incorrect. Left foot sliding Right wrist is bent over
-None or no distinct Down or Passing Poses
Frame 9: Left Arm is clipping through the body. Weight shift is constant rather than lifting up.
Frame 7: No foot resistance
Frame 20: Hardly any shift in arms' movement.
Frame 14-19: Right arm is stiff
Full Animation: There is no transfer of the figure's body during her walking so it is all unorganized. The movement in her spine is barely visible. Key points of each pose are not specified.
-Gabrielle Parmer
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Frame 1:
-Fixed Right arm poses from shoulder to wrist
-Legs twist right
-Upper Torso face left
-Contropasto
Frame 3:
-Drag on Right arm
-Spine rotation
-Waist down for weight
-Centered waist for balance
Frame 6:
-Shifted waist higher
-Shifted waist to the left
-Moved Left leg to the center for balanced weight
-Passing Pose
-rotated head to face down
Frame 9:
-Raised waist higher
-weight shift to the left
-upper torso faces right
-Spine rotation
Frame 12:
-Spine rotation
-Waist lowered for weight
-Raised left arm to be more centered
Frame 14:
-drag for both arms
-Fixed weight shift
-Raised left arm moved to center
-Moved
Frame 17:
-Lifted waist
-Moved left leg away from center
-Lifted left leg higher
-Fixed both arm to proper position
Frame 20:
-Fixed left arm to be higher
-Raised waist higher
-fixed arm drag
-Left leg moved to be more centered
Frame 24:
-Copy and pasted everything from frame 1
Mariah Kimberly Hortillano
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frame 9-left arm is clipping through body
Frame 1 and 3- the left arm seem to have switched positions
frame 3- left wrist should be rotated
frame 6- left arm is to close to body
frame 6-right leg should be straight
frame 6- add rotate to hips
frame 9- leg should be straight
fram 12-left heel should make contact with floor
frame 17- right leg is in front of left leg
frame 17-left leg should be straight, there should be no ball roll, right lef should be closer
frame 17- add rotate to hips
frame 14-right leg should be more back
Samantha Munguia
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One of the legs on 16 was crossing through the other
There was stiff arm somewhere in 8, at the beginning of the walk
There was not enough leg raise at 20
The center of gravity doesn't move at all
There needs to be foot rolling at 12 and 24
More hip raise at contact poses 5 and 16
Wrist need movement at 7
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