Exercise #16 Walk Clean Up

[Professor Arevalo]

Jessie_FixFile2.mb

Syncsketch:
https://syncsketch.com/playground/01...472534/1617654 Front
https://syncsketch.com/playground/25...472537/1617660 Side

[Elayne]

Elayne Meza

List of Fixes:

1. Frame 1: arm needs more curvature in elbow and wrist
2. Frame 6: Left arm movement is going out to far. Rotate to be closer to body
3. Left foot needs more peel off.
4. Frame 17: right foot clips through left leg needs to rotate outward
5: frame 17: needs weight shift in lower and upper body in the spin controls and root.
6. Frame 6: move the root to match center of gravity
7: needs head overlap
8. Frame 17: right arm needs reduced values
9: First up pose on frame 8 is not apparent
10. frame 12: needs opposite counter twist for lower body.
11. Right leg seems to be floaty at around frames 19-24

[JillyBean]

Jilliann Mena

Frame 6: rotate arm out to fix clipping
Frame 6: hip tilt the other way and add upper body twist
Frame 1: Added drag and rotated blue arm forward for contact (copied to 24)
Frame 6: Added drag to arm and wrist
Frame 12: Heel up rotation
Frame 6: Weight shift and outward foot path
Frame 17: Weight shift, hip tilt, foot outward path
Frame 9: slight up translation
Frame 17: slight down translation
Frame 12: hip rotate to lead leg

[Tony]

Anthony Hardy

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/1de17975898b/

[Messiah01]

Messiah Fonseca
Frame 12: rotated hip control
Frame 3/14: rotated spine down as well as neck
Frame 6: Broke elbow and wrist a bit more for loseness
Frame 6/17: Added proper weight shift and contraposto
Frame 1 readjusted right arm so its not as snappy.
Frame 12: heel roll to front/ right foot
Frames 9/20: fixed ups

[Aemoreno]

Antonio Moreno

1st frame

Fixed arm, and hip and chest movement


frame 6

fixed arm

fixed the knee, stuck it out

Frame 12

fixed pose for next contact pose


frame 17

fixed the knee, stuck it out


Cleaned up the graph for the spine, as well as the feet and shoulders, also includes the root, with the ups and downs

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/e61db7956907/#1472773/1618132

[ambiicakes]

Ambar Arrieta

- Frame 12- Heel Roll on the left leg
-Frame 1/ 24- Right arm elbow bend
-Frame 1/24- Rotate shoulder a bit more outwards
-Frame 6/17- Fix contrapossto
-Frame 1/24- Rotate head upwards
-Frame 12- Rotate head downwards
-Frame 1/24- Have hips favor leading foot
-Frame 12- Hips favor leading/planted foot
-Frame 9/20- Fixed Ups

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/61a3dc...472828/1618242

[Madeliene18]

Madeliene Martinez

1. the red leg goes inward
2. only one hip tilt for weightshift
3. blue arm does not swing around her body
4. body does not translate up
5. spine does not curve on down pose
6. head does not move with weight
7. red arm does not move to back or front of body
8. hip rotation isnt there
9. blue elbow doesnt swing to front like red does
10. blue foot doesnt stay on ground for up pose

https://syncsketch.com/sketch/c789244c0fba/#1472903/1618392

[Nathaniel I. Cordero]

Nathaniel I. Cordero


My List for Mistakes:
1. Hip does not swivel with the leading foot
2. Right arm does not swing around entire body
3. Right foot peels off at the beginning but flatly sets during the landing without a roll
4. Neither foot remains flat when passing
5. Right arm does not “break” when moving forward to show stretch
6. Spine does not rotate forward with downward steps
7. The hips don’t move over the planted foot to show weighted shifts
8. Chest does not counter in rotation with the foot
9. Upper body does not translate up or down to show upward/downward bobbing of body
10. Feet do not follow an outside/inside rotation path/ They stiffly move forward and back


Syncsketch Link: https://syncsketch.com/sketch/090efa...57/1618500/f_0