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  • New Revisions on Movie Company logo

    Hello everyone I'm back again, so tell me what you think... is it better, worst, almost there, mmm whatever? ;)
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  • #2
    tough one, personally the bottom left does it for me
    JCF3D

    Spiderwoodstudios

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    • #3
      i like the last one ... but maybe the top line a little thicker
      enough I didnt come for a whisper. I came here to hear you SCREAM!" -the hulk jijiji

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      • #4
        None of them.
        ‎"Give me $50 worth. Just drive."

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        • #5
          Professor Clayton None of them.
          wow, really... so you like the other logos the best. Ok, can you tell me why they don't work as well as the others. Personally I though that maybe the problem wasn't much on the font choice but the placement of the fenix and sutdio and I though that changing them would make it more unify.

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          • #6


            This link is from the other APP crit thread.

            I like the logo and the system that you've got there.

            One suggestion that was mentioned to me was to make the 'e' in Fenix smaller (like half height) to add some contrast... and clean up some of the dirt on the letter forms.
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            • #7
              One more time

              Ok, this is my last try for the day since I have to work on all my other stuff, but so far this is what I like. So, what do you think?

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              • #8
                Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope. And nope.

                I like the concept of #2 and #4, but it reads as "Fen X Studios".

                You'd have to reverse the 'studios' text to make it work... something like this:

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                But at a very small size, you'd lose the 'studios' part.
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                • #9
                  Professor Clayton
                  Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope. Nope. And nope.
                  I like the concept of #2 and #4, but it reads as "Fen X Studios".
                  You'd have to reverse the 'studios' text to make it work... something like this:

                  But at a very small size, you'd lose the 'studios' part.

                  Ok, so basically I should go back to the one I turned in and just add the texture to the font?

                  I see your point that on versions #2, and #5 the studios will get lost as the logo gets samller, but what about the others, are they just plain bad.

                  ***Weird, I have been working on my logo almost all weekend and it seem hard to believe that I haven't imporve it at all after all the revisions I done, usually when I do more they get better.***

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                  • #10
                    OH MY GOD IT LOOKS LIke a birdy!!!

                    I'm sorry I just now noticed that, cause you know it looked like a crashing tsunami wave at first.. WOA wait its a PHEONIX.. OOH THATS why its called.. .hrm..
                    ok alright I know... I know...
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                    • #11
                      Originally posted by Suxa
                      Ok, so basically I should go back to the one I turned in and just add the texture to the font?
                      The one that I refered to earlier had a little too much texture that made it a little hard to read. Txturing the text slightly would help unify it.

                      Originally posted by Suxa
                      I see your point that on versions #2, and #5 the studios will get lost as the logo gets samller, but what about the others, are they just plain bad.
                      To put it bluntly, yeah. The text is fine. The font is fine. There just needs to be a little more contrast and that might be best served thorugh making the 'e' smaller or making the word 'studios' appear vertical and and replacing the 'i'.

                      Originally posted by Suxa
                      ***Weird, I have been working on my logo almost all weekend and it seem hard to believe that I haven't imporve it at all after all the revisions I done, usually when I do more they get better.***
                      Happens to the best of us.
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